QUOTE(marcemusza @ Apr 13 2012, 06:16 PM)
I wanted to share with you my Blog, I created it about a month ago and I am working really hard on it. I just want to have it as a second source of traffic generation method (and making money of course), list building and a place to make a name of myself.
So I will ask you kindly if you can visit it and take a look around, and honestly, criticize it.
- What can I do to improve it?
- Do you like the Look & Feel?
- Is the content written poorly? (I am non native English speaker and while I work on my business online, I am studying by myself English to improve my skills)
- Should I place adsense ads to make extra cash?
Please make honest and constructive critics, I publicly share this because I want to improve every aspect of this blog, and the best source to learn from my mistakes is just people telling me what's wrong.http://www.marceblog.com
In reviewing your blog I would say that I like the idea that you have for it, but try and write more benefit driven content for your readers. I like how you have incorporated pictures and video into some of your blog posts. People love to see pictures, so always make sure that you have a picture/ video within each of your blog posts. Also it would be nice to see your 'custom menu' at the top with tabs on. These tabs could be for example:
Welcome - Everyone want to feel welcomed as it makes them feel more at home.
About Me - This can be two or three paragraphs all about who you. Put a picture of yourself on this page as it will help your readers to feel more comfortable knowing who you are. It will also help add more value to your blog.
Resources - This can be tips of products that you have used that you feel would benefit your readers.
Free Gift - This can be something like a free ebook
These are just a few suggestions, but I hope that it helps!
To Your Success